diff --git a/CppCoreGuidelines.md b/CppCoreGuidelines.md
index 4a2b6e1..13e4a32 100644
--- a/CppCoreGuidelines.md
+++ b/CppCoreGuidelines.md
@@ -11368,8 +11368,6 @@ Also, `#` and `##` encourages the definition and use of macros:
 
 There are workarounds for low-level string manipulation using macros. For example:
 
-    string s = "asdf" "lkjh";   // ordinary string literal concatenation
-
     enum E { a, b };
 
     template<int x>
@@ -11381,9 +11379,10 @@ There are workarounds for low-level string manipulation using macros. For exampl
         }
     }
 
-    void f(int x, int y)
+    void f()
     {
-        string sx = stringify<x>();
+        string s1 = stringify<a>();
+        string s2 = stringify<b>();
         // ...
     }